WHAT IS THIS COMIC ABOUT?

WHAT IS THIS COMIC ABOUT? A Fractionated Scorpion Maiden is a planned 5-issue high-fantasy, adventure, and psychological drama webcomic that tells the adventures of Feolae, a scorpion warrior and the Omen of the Celestials. Feolae is exceptionally powerful, but she has 2 major flaws— One of them is that she is unable to see the living. She can see rocks, soil, mountains, the sky but she can’t see monsters or humans or anything that walks and breathes. She has to rely on a human man who possesses a powerful artifact known as the BESTOWAL OF TRUST that negates that curse.

Together, the man and the scorpion must depend on each other as they embark on a journey in a pre-utopian world of sand and snow, battle evil cannibal revenant bandits, abstract-looking demons, powerful demon-worshipping trade warriors armed with morphing technology, and the most dangerous of all—Gorcrains—8-9 feet tall creatures that are part man, part frog, part fish and part something else and extremely lethal and tough to kill.

Here’s the clicker and Feolae’s 2nd flaw: She is schizophrenic and has a multiple personality disorder. This is explained in 4 of the issues where each of these issues are a completely different adventure with a similar riff: The Man and the Scorpion set off on a mission, they interact with each other and contemplate reality as it is, encounter strange phenomena and worldy events, journey through harsh landscapes, fight foes, then tangle with the ultimate antagonist of the series—Vescas, the Burden-Carrier of the Gorcrain Dynasty.

SO, what’s her deal?
With Feolae’s ailments caused from a previous severe traumatic experience with Vescas, each of issues 1-4 are of her warped perception. In every issue, she and the Human companion look different, behave different, act different, and have different abilities, powers and weapons. The monsters they encounter are different. The terrain they walk through is different, the phenomena and worldly events are different. And their final conflict against Vescas is different. Feolae essentially sees herself with 4 fractured personalities with different behaviors that warp her comprehension of reality.

Which is why….
IN THE 5TH ISSUE–the Human will be the protagonist of the story and explain from his viewpoint of how the adventure went, what really happened, and which personality of Feolae is the real one—which scorpion was she really? What devastation had they caused? How many lives have they taken? Can they be the heroes her Celestials want her to be? Can she be controlled?………

Can she be contained?

Behold….

A FRACTIONATED SCORPION MAIDEN